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| Mrs. Yates' Online Writing Journal |
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| my memories turned into free form poetry |
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| Bikes I have a scar on my knee. I got the scar when I was 7. I was a tom-boy. I never really was a girly-girl. My sister and I would always ride bikes together. We got really good at riding with no hands. Even down our big hill (in the picture.) My brother could pop wheelies really good. Of course, I wanted to do what he did. So I practiced, a lot. However, one day when I was practicing, I popped one wheely too big. And I ended up with a bloody knee. It was a very large scrape. In fact, it never went away. |
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| French Fries The other day the smell of french fries reminded me of my Nanny. I remember about four years old one Saturday night, sitting in a McDonalds with my Nanny. It must have been pretty late because it was dark outside pretty empty inside. My Nanny picked up two french fries and dipped them in ketchup. I asked her, "Why do you do it like that, Nanny?" She said, "my mother used to that way. She would love it when I would take her to McDonalds." Just then, I remember my Nanny's eyes get wet. She told me how much she missed her mom. I now dip two french fries at a time in my ketchup. |
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| My Nanny My Nanny's finger tips are soft and smooth. They look like tiny wrinkled perals. she always smells like handcream and her car always smelled like fresh tissues and green chewing gum. Early mornings at her house smelled of coffee and french toast. There she would be, in the kitchen, in her powder blue bathrobe and soft slippers, making breakfast. |
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| Winters on the farm |
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| They were two large twin maple trees that stood side by side. I watched them all year long, for years. I would watch them through the long winters with their bare bones with standing our cold winters. Then in the spring I would wait for the tiny buds to appear. |
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| All summer long I would play under my trees. They provided nice shade. There was a colony of ants that lived inside of one of the trees. They would march in their line back and forth carrying food or other dead bugs. I thought it was amazing to watch. I always knew it was fall because my trees were always the first ones to turn. They turned this amazingly brilliant shade of blazing yellow! It was like looking at two bright suns! Fall was the best. My two brothers, Gib and Clint, and my sister Jasmine, and I would love collecting all the fallen leaves and piling them up and jumping in them. This one fall, I remember we stuffed my sister's clothes with as many leaves as possible. We wanted her to look like a chubby person. Those trees were kind of like an extra family member, like a brother or sister. They watched us grow up. They were always there through out the years. They experienced so much our our life with us. I miss those trees. |
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| I wrote this journal entry in the morning. Later in the day, I found a poem written by Lillian Moore that sounded like I wrote the poem about my trees. The Tree on the Corner I’ve seen the tree on the corner in spring bud and summer green. Yesterday it was yellow gold. Then a cold wind began to blow. Now I know— you really do not see a tree until you see its bones. -Lillian Moore |
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